PDF Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-pF6zq-KAW3Y9LwI9Kmr54AgulrxtDWf/view?usp=sharing
Archive of Our Own Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/29564727
Original TES Blades story: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y0Ucs3uvVAY
Hope you guys enjoy the story!
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Can't wait to read it, given your knowledge of the lore of the Elder Scrolls universe 🙂
I'm looking forward to reading this. I write a lot of connected shorts myself, a good chunk set in various times of TES universe. I'm not familiar with the Blades "actual" story since i've never played it – but I really enjoy your lore videos, so I'll definitely give that a watch 🙂
Never would have thought youd look like that
Maybe eventually you will be able to write an official TES Story even if it's a short one
I would no way play that game sadly so thank you very much for doing this.
Congratulations on putting your story out there! I'm really excited to read it and it's really cool that you did this. I'm doing a story from a different part of the Elder Scrolls timeline myself, and your videos have been super helpful. I've also been wrestling with how close to stick to the way things happen in the game and how much license I can take, so I was really happy to hear you say you took some license as well, as I agree that some tweaking here and there would make a better story. Anyway, congrats, thanks for all the brilliant content, and I'm really looking forward to reading your story!
Farengar! These are some extraordinary texts, you’ve outdone the dragonstone!
The Story looks great and entertaining! I'm actually writing my own Elder Scrolls Story as well! it's the story of my Dragonborn! Basically my story of the Elder Scrolls v: Skyrim!
Skyrim Bolivian
Already enjoying it so far. I am not through the first chapter but am already impressed. The only sad thing is that I forgot to apply as proof reader. I saw the notice and planed for it but than forgot. A shame since I have already found some small things that I could have pointed out since I am a hobby writer too and watched a lot of video's and even an intire lecture series on writing. They are not big but once you know of them they can really distract while reading. I am already taking notes and will share them once I've completed it. Witch will be soon if it keeps being this good of a story.
This is amazing. It's is well written for your first fanfiction. I' m a fan of fantasy stories and TES is my favourite fantasy franchise. I think TES needs more fanfiction considering how rich and deep is the lore.
First time i've been excited about reading something in a while
Sounds entertaining. I can't wait!!
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More cover on you page
i would like to read it, thanks for writing it
Downloaded , a few days ago I saw an old video saying you had a 200 plus page book at the end, you've saved me from asking so let's see 🙂
Kirkbride has a philosophy about "canon"
"Canon" doesn't matter very much
Whatever the player believes is canon
I don't know if this has been addressed yet, but
On page 87, in the first or second paragraph, you say "Penitus Ocularus agens"
I saw the file. It's a novel, not a long novel but surely a novel. Great work!